This is my finish animation, I used iStopmotion to film and edited it with iMovie. Please leave feedback to what you thought, liked and what I should change to make it better.
I enjoyed your animation, I think it had a nice use of sound effects and the character models were nice, as a piece of constructive criticism, the animation could have been more fluid, as the penguin moves around kind of awkwardly, though I understand the time constraint and the environment to animate in were not ideal.
Good use of sound effects and background, very simple background but works well. I like the detail of your penguin and seal, it works well, GO TEAM ANDREW
Amazing animation Andrew! Really nice! I liked it a lot! If I had to say one thing that I didn't like it was that at one point with the seal, it looks as though he magically floats into the scene rather than using his arms to make him move. Other than that, I love the sound effects and everything else about this movie. Nice job!
This is Amazing Andrew I liked it a lot was so good to watch. The detail on the penguins and seal were really good the movie was fantastic. The sound effects were really good and well synched with the flow of the movie. I can"t think of anything i don't like about it was really good well done :) :)
laughable, that's all i can say. if i had to pick one bad point it would be to agree with james and say about the floating seal. but other than that really well done.
I enjoyed your animation, I think it had a nice use of sound effects and the character models were nice, as a piece of constructive criticism, the animation could have been more fluid, as the penguin moves around kind of awkwardly, though I understand the time constraint and the environment to animate in were not ideal.
ReplyDeleteGood use of sound effects and background, very simple background but works well. I like the detail of your penguin and seal, it works well, GO TEAM ANDREW
ReplyDeleteAmazing animation Andrew! Really nice! I liked it a lot! If I had to say one thing that I didn't like it was that at one point with the seal, it looks as though he magically floats into the scene rather than using his arms to make him move. Other than that, I love the sound effects and everything else about this movie. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThis is Amazing Andrew I liked it a lot was so good to watch. The detail on the penguins and seal were really good the movie was fantastic.
ReplyDeleteThe sound effects were really good and well synched with the flow of the movie. I can"t think of anything i don't like about it was really good well done :) :)
laughable, that's all i can say. if i had to pick one bad point it would be to agree with james and say about the floating seal. but other than that really well done.
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